I really like it! I'm listening to the Born to Die album right now! Do you mind a little criticism? If you take a blurring tool or something like it and run it through the hair, it will look more real. The same with the shading of the skin. The highlights in the hair is amazing by the way! Great job! What drawing program do you use?
Hi, thank you so much and thanks for the advise, I will check that out. I use photoshop and my Bamboo wacom.
No problem! Just a little healthy advice! lol I don't know how to work Photoshop. I use Paint Tool SAI. It's really easy for me. But, I do use a bamboo tablet. Like I said, just use a blurring tool, NOT A SMEARING TOOL! Smearing tools will just mess it up.
The hair is smudgy, get back in and refine it. The face also blurry, unrefined. Get back in and clean it up, it looks like shes got mud or a 6 o clock shadow.
I am aware of its look and it is only a sketch. I don't like your negative tone, and its sad to hear that. Deviantart is made for ppl who like to share their personal artwork whether its good or bad so change your attitude or don't comment at all!
Negative tone? I'm giving you comments, on how to improve. Did I say it was bad? No, I said she looks like she has a 5 o clock shadow. Instead of replying in such a OMG NO way, take the advice or leave it. But, don't put it in groups if you don't want comments other than OMG THATS AMAZING. You'll never improve that way.